by Amir » Fri Jul 18, 2014 10:34 am
Dude, I just want to say I fucking loved this animaion, I liked the effects a lot, although some of them looked VERY lazy, but the sun effects, clouds, rain etc...were awesome.
As for the movements, they were way better than the movements in your other animations, they were more clear to understand, but they aren't smooth enough and need to be more fluid. Fighting moves were pretty good, I'm impressed by that, very creative, I can tell you've put a lot of effort into that, you're not afraid to try new things, so great job on that.
You need to work on your movements, they still look weird sometimes, (although they look better) a bit shaky and need to be more polished.
Some of the effects could of been a lot lees lazy, you need more details to the effects, for example look at 1:44 this was pretty bad, some of the things aren't even moving, just that poor lightning effect.
And the dust effect at 0:20, it stopped moving and just started to fade away.
But overall the best beginner animation I've seen in a while, or the best I've ever seen.