Ray's Art: Ben #2

[Daniël]

Rock Golem?

[KYROK]

This is high and pure quality, Draw moreeeee MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEE

[Raymond]

Rock Golem?

Rock Golem?

Lol I guess Rock Golem is a very broad name.

Thanks KYROK, I will continue to post more stuff here as I make it.

[Raymond]

Lauren Cohan aka Maggie Greene from The Walking Dead.

[Jojishi]

Wow man that's definitely an improvement. Facial structure feels right and it looks much better keeping the line thickness the same as the body. Only thing that looks like it could be improved are the breasts which don't have any perspective to them, and they're a bit circular looking. Have a look at a boob drawing tutorial lol.

[Raymond]

Thanks Jojishi, I still have a lot to learn. Here's another

Andrew Lincoln aka Rick Grimes from The Walking Dead.

[Raymond]

I made a new one today.

Anthony

[Raymond]

Here's another.

Carl

[Clies]

My favourites are the first, Ben, Lauren and this one. It's very good! the face looks right, and I like the folds.


Just one thing tho, when someone crosses their arms, the upper arms goes down at an angle, not straight down like you did, this made the fore arm way too large. This could have been prevented if you did that pose before drawing it (like doing a movement yourself when you are having problems in animation), good luck man.

[kellawgs]

These have a great style to them. I found myself eager to see the next one, all the way to the end.

[Jojishi]

Looking nice Raymond! The structure in these is much better lately. However, in the Anthony drawing the hand grabbing the towel looks a little small. :p

Also, can you please put all the drawings in your first post? That would be nice. :)

[ZucchiniJuice]

Yeah putting all the drawings in the first post would be nice. The consistancy of style is very much there, but your recent one feels to have forced clothing folds. Theres usually that many clothing folds in soft clothing like that, but many of them pretty much cant be made in linework, only shading as such. Also, heres something I learned recently in my own drawing, at line meeting points, put darker, thicker lines there. You can try and experiement with that. I can definitely see your progress getting better as I scroll through. Nice job. Also, you going into something relating to art ray?

[Raymond]

Just one thing tho, when someone crosses their arms, the upper arms goes down at an angle, not straight down like you did, this made the fore arm way too large. This could have been prevented if you did that pose before drawing it (like doing a movement yourself when you are having problems in animation), good luck man.

I'm worrying less about perfection and more about resemblance, but positioning is definitely something I need to work on.

These have a great style to them. I found myself eager to see the next one, all the way to the end.

That means a lot dude. I'm glad you're still stopping by every so often. :)

Also, can you please put all the drawings in your first post? That would be nice. :)

I'll do this now. Thanks Jojishi!

Yeah putting all the drawings in the first post would be nice. The consistancy of style is very much there, but your recent one feels to have forced clothing folds. Theres usually that many clothing folds in soft clothing like that, but many of them pretty much cant be made in linework, only shading as such. Also, heres something I learned recently in my own drawing, at line meeting points, put darker, thicker lines there. You can try and experiement with that. I can definitely see your progress getting better as I scroll through. Nice job. Also, you going into something relating to art ray?

Thanks for the advice man. I've noticed I have trouble with clothing folds. It's hard to judge where they should go. I'll have to look up some tutorials on this.


My sister's been asking me to draw one of her, so here she is.

Jennifer

[Blademaster]

really cute dude

[Raymond]

Thanks man! I made 2 more.

Luke

Jerry