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Raymond wrote:I like the close up scene with all the particles falling down and the blood trickling down from his fist. That was cool. Just work on your foot placement. I know you probably rushed this one, but that's like the easiest thing to get right :P.
Amir wrote:The foot placement is very off, that's the main problem. Now I noticed that it started off really good, the first part of the animation was awesome, the second half of the animation however was also good but more shaky and choppy.
I think you are still interz but just a little rusty but you'll get your grove back soon.
Jojishi wrote:It's rough around the edges, but this animation has a quality which shines through the choppiness. So although it isn't smooth the power and understanding of poses is still strong. The part I liked was the close up with the fist and blood. That was great.
Amir's advice is good. I agree with what he said, but I'm sure things will start smoothing out once you get back into the groove. Honestly, this animation was real fun to look at and I think that's what mattered most. I know the choppiness will fade away the more you animate.
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